I enjoyed that very much! I am looking forward to more. It paints a vivid picture of both the setting and of Howie's mental state.
Thanks. The first chapter is always the easiest. Then the complications come. Then I forget the theme. Then I have to go back and try to remember why I'm even writing it. Typical first draft problems. :p
I've got 46,000 words so far. Nearing the midpoint.
I also like the bike kid. He's weird.
Yeah, he's all right. He may or may not also be instrumental in bringing down the government and the law that drives the conflict in this story, but we'll see. He just needs a friend.
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