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New song

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Hey all...just put up a new video of a song I've been working on, let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aU6e4JiVKHs

I'm still working occasionally on Warigo, though I haven't been able to devote much time or creative energy to the OHR lately. I blame my new job. I'm still around though, and still working on stuff. More to come.
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The guitar riff is great, but that drum is overpowering, especially during the chorus when it seems to take its own beat.

Try a version without the drums, compare the two, and then start bringing the drum back in slowly until you find a nice balance.

Wouldn't mind hearing an occasional "whoo hoo" or something for variety.
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That snare is pretty loud now that you mention it, especially because of the audio in the video where it's hard to tell that there's an entire drumkit playing. I'll play with the volume in the final recording.

Ultimately, this might end up having sung lyrics, possibly including but not limited to a whoo hoo. :)
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