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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 4:08 pm
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Hmm, I see the point about the hips. I'll fix that up. And yeah, looking at it now, her stomach is rather long, heh. Thanks!
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 4:29 pm
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@BMR: You're welcome.

I also feel like showing some graphics today. Smile

Here's a screenshot:


I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 4:35 pm
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They actually look rather charming. Has a very retro feel to it. I like it.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 4:56 pm
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And here's the female template again.






Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.


EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
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Red Slime
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 5:08 pm
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Coin



Thunder bolt


Chest


Key


Padlock


This guy...


Tree


House


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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 5:24 pm
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@imaginegaming:
I like you're drawings, they looks really nice! Grin
This gyu lookes funny. Also I like the coin's animation!
The Lillylad-house reminds me a bit of a pokemon center.

@BMR: Cool! Grin
The improvements are clearly visible, lookes muxch better now.
You could think aboubt making her shoulders smaller and her ams less muscular, but I don't know if that improvent is nessecary as this is a template and if clothes are added to the sprite one maybe will not notice at all.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 5:33 pm
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Lillylad? or lillyLAB?

the game looks charming and soft.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 5:57 pm
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Meowskivich wrote:
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?

the game looks charming and soft.


It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?

And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 6:06 pm
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imaginegaming wrote:
Meowskivich wrote:
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?

the game looks charming and soft.


It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?

And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.


lol, no, but I did wonder if it was a "maybe" typo.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 6:25 pm
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Meowskivich wrote:
imaginegaming wrote:
Meowskivich wrote:
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?

the game looks charming and soft.


It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?

And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.


lol, no, but I did wonder if it was a "maybe" typo.


haha ok, and I can see why you thought maybe it was a typo.
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 8:49 pm
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The team comes to the aid of some familiar faces at one point during the game. Pretty obvious who one of them is...but probably not so much on the other one...


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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 9:01 pm
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marionline wrote:
@BMR: You're welcome.
I also feel like showing some graphics today. Smile
Here's a screenshot:

I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.

I love your characters.

BMR wrote:
And here's the female template again.

Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.

Bigger boobs
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 PostWed Jul 10, 2013 10:06 pm
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Spoonweaver wrote:

BMR wrote:
And here's the female template again.

Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.

Bigger boobs


Smaller shoulders would have the same effect :)
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 PostThu Jul 11, 2013 6:06 pm
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I got the walkabouts hair fixed!

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 PostThu Jul 11, 2013 6:43 pm
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a little better, the left side (or right side, from the sprite's perspective) of the hair is still a little...not popping out as much? I don't know how to describe it
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