Hmm, I see the point about the hips. I'll fix that up. And yeah, looking at it now, her stomach is rather long, heh. Thanks!
Being from the third world, I reserve the right to speak in the third person.
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@BMR: You're welcome.
I also feel like showing some graphics today.
Here's a screenshot:
I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.
I also feel like showing some graphics today.
Here's a screenshot:
I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.
And here's the female template again.
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Being from the third world, I reserve the right to speak in the third person.
Using Editor version wip 20170527 gfx_sdl+fb music_sdl
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Being from the third world, I reserve the right to speak in the third person.
Using Editor version wip 20170527 gfx_sdl+fb music_sdl
@imaginegaming:
I like you're drawings, they looks really nice!
This gyu lookes funny. Also I like the coin's animation!
The Lillylad-house reminds me a bit of a pokemon center.
@BMR: Cool!
The improvements are clearly visible, lookes muxch better now.
You could think aboubt making her shoulders smaller and her ams less muscular, but I don't know if that improvent is nessecary as this is a template and if clothes are added to the sprite one maybe will not notice at all.
I like you're drawings, they looks really nice!
This gyu lookes funny. Also I like the coin's animation!
The Lillylad-house reminds me a bit of a pokemon center.
@BMR: Cool!
The improvements are clearly visible, lookes muxch better now.
You could think aboubt making her shoulders smaller and her ams less muscular, but I don't know if that improvent is nessecary as this is a template and if clothes are added to the sprite one maybe will not notice at all.
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?
the game looks charming and soft.
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the game looks charming and soft.
dOn'T MiNd mE! i'M jUsT CoNtAgIoUs!!!
Play Orbs CCG: http://orbsccg.com/r/4r6x
imaginegaming wrote:
It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?
And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.
Meowskivich wrote:
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?
the game looks charming and soft.
the game looks charming and soft.
It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?
And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.
lol, no, but I did wonder if it was a "maybe" typo.
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Meowskivich wrote:
lol, no, but I did wonder if it was a "maybe" typo.
imaginegaming wrote:
It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?
And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.
Meowskivich wrote:
Lillylad? or lillyLAB?
the game looks charming and soft.
the game looks charming and soft.
It's Lillylad, does the 'D' need to be more prominent?
And thank you that is what I'm shooting for.
lol, no, but I did wonder if it was a "maybe" typo.
haha ok, and I can see why you thought maybe it was a typo.
The team comes to the aid of some familiar faces at one point during the game. Pretty obvious who one of them is...but probably not so much on the other one...
Cornbread Chemist
Cornbread Chemist
marionline wrote:
@BMR: You're welcome.
I also feel like showing some graphics today.
Here's a screenshot:
I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.
I also feel like showing some graphics today.
Here's a screenshot:
I'm trying to keep the game easy to make (and still fun to play), so the standards I set are keept low.
For example, NPCs pretty much look the same, the way trough the forest is "blocky", only 5 maps, ect.
I love your characters.
BMR wrote:
And here's the female template again.
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Bigger boobs
Spoonweaver wrote:
Bigger boobs
BMR wrote:
And here's the female template again.
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Better, I hope? Or possibly worse? I've tried making her hips wider and giving her abdomen some more definition. Could still use some feedback on it though, and any will be most welcome.
EDIT: I just noticed the side-view sets have her closest leg and hip moving rather awkwardly. I must fix that.
Bigger boobs
Smaller shoulders would have the same effect :)
a little better, the left side (or right side, from the sprite's perspective) of the hair is still a little...not popping out as much? I don't know how to describe it
dOn'T MiNd mE! i'M jUsT CoNtAgIoUs!!!
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dOn'T MiNd mE! i'M jUsT CoNtAgIoUs!!!
Play Orbs CCG: http://orbsccg.com/r/4r6x



