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Does this look ok? 
 PostFri Aug 02, 2013 1:46 am
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Does this look ok?



Or does this look better?

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 PostFri Aug 02, 2013 1:54 am
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The second one looks much better, like the bridge is actually sticking off the side. The first one doesn't look awful, but it is a little weird, especially with the second one to compare it to.
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 PostFri Aug 02, 2013 2:13 pm
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They looks similar, but I agree that the second is better, for the bridge-perspective reason Giz mentioned.

I really like the building.

Also I would suggest changing the bottom of the tree trunk so it looks like roots going into the ground instead of just being flat
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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 2:27 am
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the second one looks fancier, imo
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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 8:27 am
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Thanks all for your input. Appreciate it:)

And does this look better for the trees?

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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 9:37 am
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Is lookes way better. Smile A really nice tree!
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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 12:09 pm
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although it certainly looks better, i can't help thinking that it has a butt, and i'm not entirely sure what it's supposed to represent; other than a butt.

grooves in tree bark are normally vertical. so if you want to define the texture on the tree, it might be best to start at the roots, and work upward (like you started on the edge).
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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 3:31 pm
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Also, tree trunks are much thinner than their boughs. Take a look at this, for example.
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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 10:01 pm
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Okay, I reworked the tree, what do ya think?

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 PostSun Aug 04, 2013 11:07 pm
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Looks nice. I like it.
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 PostMon Aug 05, 2013 5:30 am
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Mogri wrote:
Looks nice. I like it.


Thank you! Funny how slimming down the trunk makes the tree appear taller.
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