Momoka wrote:
But....it's C major scale, right? Shouldn't I start and end every run (Stanza? I have poor music vocab) on a C?
No, not at all. Theoretically, you can end any measure on whatever you want. The rules aren't hard and fast, after all. What you're really trying to do is work with varying amounts of tension. Since you're working in C major, C is the root note, and therefore the least tense. When you end a measure (or stanza, or run, or whatever) on a C, it feels the most relaxed, least tense, or most consonant (if you want the technical term).
The problem with this is, if everything starts and ends on the root note, the song is going to sound boring. You need a little tension to spice it up. Ending on the fifth note of the scale (G, in the case of C major), or the fourth (F) is a little more tense, but still pretty consonant. The other notes are more tense to end on (or more dissonant, if, again, you want the technical term).
In terms of developing a melody versus a harmony, theoretically your melody can be any notes in the scale over any chord progression in that scale; you don't need to tie your melody so closely to your harmony, as you've done in the town theme you posted. Even notes outside of the scale (commonly referred to as "blue" notes) can work! Of course, this is all a matter of personal preference, which is why music is art and not science, but play around, there's a lot of room for experimentation.
There are, too, certain chord progressions which are pretty amenable to just about any melody. The weirder you get, the more you'll have to tune your melody (unless avant-garde is what you want). These chord progressions show up in pop music all the time. Wikipedia actually has a pretty good article that lists some common progressions. You might want to use that as inspiration.
The most common is some variation of I - IV - V (1st note in scale, 4th, 5th). Try making a repeating progression of C, G, F, G and then writing some kind of crazy melody on top of it. It should work.
You could also try the sensitive female chord progression, which wikipedia just taught me about!
[edit]I couldn't help myself!
(Percussion helps a lot any time you want to make a song exciting, as you might during a battle. Also, sorry it isn't midi, but I threw this together in garage band before I realized it wouldn't export midi.)




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