House Escape review

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Devina_Star
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House Escape review

Post by Devina_Star »

i have only just downloaded this game and finished it quite quickly.
good job on the map and the character, but i found the storyline was kind of demented, check your spelling "were seven hundred people were killed" the first were was meant to be where wasn't it?
any way it was better than i could make, but it needed more biffo
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Post by Mogri »

Hello, and welcome to Slime Salad.

While we don't have any guidelines for how reviews are to be structured, the site rules mention that reviews are expected to use proper grammar and spelling. Additionally, it is recommended that you include one or more screenshots of the game with your review. If you don't know how to do this, please let us know and we'll be happy to assist you.

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Post by Spoonweaver »

HURRAY, I got reviewed, sort of.

..and yes it is true. I get were and where mixed up a lot.
and what exactly do you mean by needed more biffo?

wtf is biffo
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