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by marionline
Wed Nov 05, 2014 8:54 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

@TMC: Thanks for your help! :)
by marionline
Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:50 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

@misac: I'm learning japanese for several years. I consider this a very hard language, compared to english or german. But when I was in Japan, I saw that many people from other asian countries did not have the difficulties (or had other advantages, like the writing is silimar) that I had. On the oth...
by marionline
Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:12 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

@ Taco Bot: Thans for your help! I fixed the mistakes. @Pepsi Ranger: Thanks for the link. It is pretty cool that a university offers support for all sorts of writing, not only reports and university-related things. I'll post the next short part. I have a feeling that this time I added to many comma...
by marionline
Sun Oct 26, 2014 9:36 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

Hey, it's me again. Thanks for your help! :) kylekrack, are you learning german? :) Denken is an irregular verb, it should be "gedacht" insted of "gedenkt." Don't ash me why, verbs for can be awful in german. :angel: I took Taco Bot's version and tried to follow your advice, kyle...
by marionline
Sat Oct 25, 2014 9:49 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

@kylekrack: Oh, I'm sorry to hear that the PC killed your work. I really hate it if that happens. :( I'd have liked to see your version. If you have any suggestions on style improvements fee free to let me know. :) My native language is german, but I've been practising a lot of english last year, so...
by marionline
Sat Oct 25, 2014 9:30 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

Thanks for the explaination. That's really helpfull! :D I guess we have similar rules there to place comma, but I don't know them in my own language either. I'll try to double check on my newly written texts for comma mistakes, but it seems like there is really a lot to pay attention to regarding th...
by marionline
Sat Oct 25, 2014 9:08 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

Hey Taco Bot,
thanks a lot for your help! :D
You're really fast!

I see that I made some mistakes and I'll try not to repeat them.

One thing I'm not sure about is when to use coma in English? Is there an easy rule to remember?
by marionline
Sat Oct 25, 2014 8:45 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: please proofread my text
Replies: 29
Views: 5250

please proofread my text

Hello! :) I'm looking for someone who speaks good english (or better than me at least) for proofreading some texts I wrote for making a short visual novel. Maybe you could also advice me on better expressions, helping me to improve my english writing skill and make the whole thing sound better... Th...
by marionline
Mon Oct 06, 2014 5:43 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Looking for advice on quest creation
Replies: 3
Views: 677

Looking for advice on quest creation

Hello, I'm being stuck at game making. :( I need some help with the organization/planning of how to procede. I want to include quests in the game, but I'm not sure how to add them in a good (= less time consuming) way. The quests should be selected by the player, so there is no order. I plan have at...
by marionline
Sat Sep 13, 2014 10:25 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: BMR's Simple Slice Tutorial
Replies: 4
Views: 2619

Thanks for the helpfull tutorial! :D I think, it's really good! It explains in a easy to understand way and is certainly a good addition to the other articles about slices on the wiki. Could it be added to the wiki's new howto-section? (Offtopic: I'd support Pepsi Ranger's idea to make an section fo...
by marionline
Sat Sep 13, 2014 10:16 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Looking for Slice Example
Replies: 5
Views: 1074

Thanks for the example, Bob! Together with BMR's tutorial I could makea usefull amount of sense of the example. :D Still, I have one question about how slices are handeled in the engin: Do I have to put the slice I want to use in the slice collection first? Or can it take the images from the graphic...
by marionline
Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:54 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Looking for Slice Example
Replies: 5
Views: 1074

Thanks for the links. .) The first tutorial, I read it some time ago. I think it's not easy to understand. If it were a shoe I'd say it just dosen't fit, I can't get along with this tutorial, somehow. :/ The example script is seems a bit to complex. How about an example just to show a slice on the s...
by marionline
Fri Sep 12, 2014 6:45 pm
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Looking for Slice Example
Replies: 5
Views: 1074

Looking for Slice Example

Hello! :) I searched the ohr-wiki to find an exaple how to show slices on the screen, but I couldn't find the article about slices. I a looking for a really simple example , so I can experiment with build on it to learn how use slices. Should you know where to find an article or simple example, plea...
by marionline
Wed Aug 06, 2014 11:04 am
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Competitive Collab Contest
Replies: 36
Views: 15129

An other question:
"Five of everything else"
Does that mean 5 graphics in total?
Or 5 of each cathegory?
by marionline
Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:15 am
Forum: Game Discussion
Topic: Competitive Collab Contest
Replies: 36
Views: 15129

I like the idea! :D I'd like to take part, but I'm a bit busy. I'll try to make some graphics. Can I submit graphics from other games I made? If so, what license should I put on them? cc-by or gpl or something? What about if I make a game that includes these graphics? Will the games license be affec...